I like to go to Egypt. Since I was in the college and I listened about Egypt in history, I found it very interesting, also the culture and mythology like me so much.
I would like go for tourism, but not to study or to live there, because I don´t know how is the education and is a country very different from Chile, in all aspects.
About this country I know things that happened in the past, the culture and old buildings, for example the pyramids.
I would like know how the pyramids and the sphinx were built, without heavy equipment or the actual technology, and I want to see how are they really, what is their real size.
Also I want see the ancient paintings in many different places whit its unique colors and the features representations of people, animals and gods. I like see the glyphs too, to see the fine details of its different figures. However all this would be much better with explanations of tourist guides.
Other place I want to know is the river Nile, the river that sustained and made possible the development of this interesting civilization in the desert.
I hope to know this place someday and can enrich my life with this beautiful memory.
Wow!
ResponderEliminarI like sow much the spinxs!
You have very good taste...
xD
I ^like to go to Egypt. Since I was in the WW college and I WW listened about Egypt in history, I found it very interesting, also the culture and mythology WF like me so much.
ResponderEliminarI would like ^ go for tourism, but not to study or to live there, because I don´t know how is the education and is a country very different from Chile, in all aspects. for example.....
About this country I know things that happened in the past, the culture and old buildings, for example the pyramids.
I would like know how the pyramids and the sphinx were built, without heavy equipment or the actual technology, and I want to see how are they really, what is their real size.
Also I want see the ancient paintings in many different places whit its unique colors and the features representations of people, animals and gods. I like WF see the glyphs too, to see the fine details of its different figures. However ^all this would be much better with explanations of tourist guides.
Other place I want to know is the WO river Nile, the river that sustained and made possible the development of this interesting civilization in the desert.
I hope to know this place someday and can enrich my life with this beautiful memory.
carola,
good I agree with you that it´s a very interesiting place.
Now,
I think you need to make your writing more cohesive i.e. you need to bring your ideas more connected in the text. If you stablish a certain point you need to back it up, to give support to it.
check the coreections
miss
p.s you got a 5
I have an history about that country...
ResponderEliminarOne friend went to egypt on summer; well all her family has an really big nose and the people there loves it; so one day they were walking towards one pyramid and one man offered her to exchange her little sister for a camel!
I would like to go to Egypt. Since I was in the school and I listened to Egypt in history, I found it very interesting, also the culture and mythology like me so much.
ResponderEliminarI would like to go for tourism, but not to study or to live there, because I don´t know how is the education and is a country very different from Chile, in all aspects.
About this country I know things that happened in the past, the culture and old buildings, for example the pyramids.
I would like know how the pyramids and the sphinx were built, without heavy equipment or the actual technology, and I want to see how are they really, what is their real size.
Also I want see the ancient paintings in many different places whit its unique colors and the features representations of people, animals and gods. I like to see the glyphs too, to see the fine details of its different figures. However, all this would be much better with explanations of tourist guides.
Other place I want to know is the Nile River, the river that sustained and made possible the development of this interesting civilization in the desert.
I hope to know this place someday and can enrich my life with this beautiful memory.